Today we wrote "This is just to say" poems.
''This is just to say''
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Today we wrote "This is just to say" poems.
''This is just to say''
This is just to say' I punched you in the face, because you were being annoying It felt so good to punch you in the face Forgive me, but it was just so funny I'm truly sorry | This is just to say' I put slime in your hair i watched you try to take it out bit by bit your hair smelt like slime you were sad forgive me, but it was just so hilarious |
so today we did these 5 adverb start sentences with words our class came up with!
Slowly, Lyzea copied the person next to her.
Sadly, Hinerau's dog passed away.
Cluelessly, Kaea didn't know the answer to question 10.
Joyfully, Lily-Anne jumped.
Fortunately, Maia missed the bus.
here is a peace of writing I've done this week.
I can still feel the warmth of the sun on the trunk of the pine tree, even though it's dark.
When I told Dad I was going for a walk, He was struggling with the farm accounts.
He won't stay up waiting for me.
He thinks mum is overly protective, that she shouldn't worry so much, that i'm tougher than she thinks.
And he needs his sleep.
The night-vision goggles are slipping on my head so I have to stop and adjust the straps.
There had been a lot in the newspaper article yesterday about them as well - how I go out at night into the forestry, about how the goggles work, about how they give me some freedom to be a kid, about what I get to see in the dark like the morepork I think of as my own, and the possums.